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Fifteen minutes. Three punches. One strike.

Draw.


base scene: files.1337upload.net/firstbloo…
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Wyzilla Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2017
Biceps are a bit thick and I dunno. The model just looks kinda bloated? I think in the future you might want to reduce the overall size of the features, but increase their definition if that makes any sense?
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Joazzz2 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
not sure if i follow. what should a Space Marine look like to you?

i'm only going with what the armor proportions tell me while trying to not make his limbs look too elongated and thin
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Wyzilla Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2017
Looking at it more, I think the traps need to be bigger, maybe the head raised up a bit. It looks really sunken. Were the head and body made separately? That might be it.
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Joazzz2 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
head's looking down a bit, and the neck is like a tree trunk so it looks like it's down between the shoulders. traps?
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Wyzilla Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2017
Trapezius Muscle. It's the dual group of muscles on the back of the neck you'll often see on weight lifters, it gives the neck a triangular appearance. 
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SkyPotatoFire Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2017
Bloody stunning!
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Joazzz2 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i sure do hope so
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SkyPotatoFire Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2017
How are you with a sword?
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TheOmegaDiajin Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2017  Student Digital Artist
This from the novels where Loken and Lucius have a match and Lucius wins the rematch? 
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Joazzz2 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i'd love to do that scene, but this is just a Son of Horus dueling an Ultramarine. you can see more of the smurfs in the background.
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black3825 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2017
I was already wondering... An eye of Horus tattoo during an Ultramarine duel? Whot.
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Joazzz2 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
great to see that someone noticed that - he's a visitor on an Ultramarines vessel, or the Ultramarines are on a Sons of Horus boat. either way, two Legions mingling during a crusade and finding the time to test their blade skills.
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black3825 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2017
Well... The whole Horus heresy was still an unbelievable thing during the great crusade. There was rarely ever a reason to refuse one's brothers from another Legion. Except for the Alpha Legion being jerks and the Blood Angels rather not talking about their vampire fetishism.
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BlueRicki Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2017
wow o.o
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